Do you want to become famous?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I want to be famous.
I want to be a famous baseball player.
And I want to be a famous pianist too.
I want to write many songs.
These are I want to be a famous peoples.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Tuesday ^^
T. DON
I want to be a famous baseball player.
And I want to be a famous pianist too.
I want to write many songs.
These are I want to be a famous peoples.
>> Of course I want to be famous.
I want to be a famous baseball player. And I want to be a famous pianist too. I want to write many songs. These are what I want to be when I become famous.
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