Do you want to become famous?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes I want to famous.
Because will be famous, I will get many moneys.
And maybe I will do good at working.
And lastly maybe I think I\'ll get complimets.
These are I want to be famous.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Good answers! See you tomorrow ^^
T. DON
Yes I want to famous.
Because will be famous, I will get many moneys.
And maybe I will do good at working.
And lastly maybe I think I\'ll get complimets.
These are I want to be famous.
Because will be famous, I will get many moneys.
And maybe I will do good at working.
And lastly maybe I think I\'ll get complimets.
These are I want to be famous.
>> Yes I want to be famous because if became famous, I will get lots of money. And maybe I will have a nice job and lastly maybe I think I\'ll get compliments from what I do. These are the reasons why I want to be famous.
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