Do you want to change anything on your appearance?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, first I need some diet. And I want to get long fingers and slender ankles. It\'s because everyday, I always walk to school, academy and home. So my ankles became thick. Also, my fingers are thick and short so it doesn\'t look nice. If it possible, I want to become that appearance.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework and for doing a great job in answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
Yes, first I need some diet.
>> Correct
OR >> Yes, first, I need to start a diet.
And I want to get long fingers and slender ankles.
>> Correct
It\'s because everyday, I always walk to school, academy and home.
>> Correct
So my ankles became thick.
>> Correct
Also, my fingers are thick and short so it doesn\'t look nice.
>> Correct
If it possible, I want to become that appearance
>>If possible, I would like to have that appearance.
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