Do you want to change something in your appearance? Why or why not? Explain in detail.

2022-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Do you want to change something in your appearance? Why or why not? Explain in detail. Most of people are not satisfied with their appearance. I also too. I take care of my appearance than the adjusted one. I think that we need confidence in our appearance. Self-esteem makes me feel strong in my life.

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Yes, we should be contented with what we have in life. Our appearance brings us character. It\'s our identity.

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Most of people are not satisfied with their appearance. I also too.

>> Most of people are not satisfied with their appearance and I am one of them.

I take care of my appearance than the adjusted one.

>> I take care of my appearance instead of changing it.

I think that we need confidence in our appearance.

>> CORRECT

Self-esteem makes me feel strong in my life.

>> CORRECT

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