Do you want to change something in your appearance? Why or why not? Explain in detail.

2022-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don\'t want to change anything in my appearance yet, but I\'m worrying about my height. I\'m tall at my age, but I can\'t sure that I will grow more later. So I\'m worrying about my height. But I don\'t care about it that much, and I think I will grow more.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Yes, we should be contented with what we have in life. Our appearance brings us character. It\'s our identity.

PS: I think your height will become taller as time goes by. You\'re still young anyway.

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I don\'t want to change anything in my appearance yet, but I\'m worrying about my height.

>> I don\'t want to change anything in my appearance but I am a little bit worries about my height.

I\'m tall at my age, but I can\'t sure that I will grow more later.

>> I am tall for my age now but I am not sure if I will grow much taller.

So I\'m worrying about my height.

>> This is why I worry about my height.

But I don\'t care about it that much, and I think I will grow more.

>> Although, I don\'t care about it that much and I think that I will still grow taller.

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