Do you want to change something in your appearance? Why or why not?
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I wish I had double eyelids. It was my complex that my eyes were always small when I took pictures. Also, I\'m very interested in makeup, but I think it looks much better on a face with double eyelids. However, I have no intention of transferring it to a seal because I am more afraid of plastic surgery.
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Hi [이름]!
Well, there really is no shame when it comes to plastic surgery but we need to learn how to be confident in our own skin. :)
PS: Sorry if I was not able to make it into our class today. There was an emergency. :(
I wish I had double eyelids.
>> CORRECT
It was my complex that my eyes were always small when I took pictures.
>> It was my insecurity that my eyes were always small when I took pictures.
Also, I\'m very interested in makeup, but I think it looks much better on a face with double eyelids.
>> Also, I\'m very interested in makeup but I think that it would look much better if I had double eyelids.
However, I have no intention of transferring it to a seal because I am more afraid of plastic surgery.
>> However, I have no intention of changing is because I am more afraid of plastic surgery.
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