Do you want to change your skin color?
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This is a very difficult question for me.
Frankly speaking, If I have a chance t change my skin color without plastic surgery, I would like to try that.
Because my skin is not pure.
My skin is a yellow color, there are many freckles, black dots and wrinkles.
However even though my skin is not beautiful, I don\'t want to do botox, fillers, and any kinds of plastic treatments.
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Teacher ELLY.
Do you want to change your skin color?
This is a very difficult question for me.
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or>>This is a very tough question for me to handle.
Frankly speaking, if I have a chance to change my skin color without plastic surgery, I would like to try that.
Frankly speaking, if I have a chance to change my skin color without plastic surgery, I would like to try that.
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or>>To be honest, if I do get a chance to change my skin color without the use of plastic surgery, I would love to try it.
Because my skin is not pure.
Because my skin is not pure.
>>Because my skin color is neither white nor black.
My skin is a yellow color, there are many freckles, black dots and wrinkles.
My skin is a yellow color, there are many freckles, black dots and wrinkles.
>>My skin is a bit yellow in color, and there are many freckles, black dots and wrinkles.
However, even though my skin is not beautiful, I don\'t want to do botox, fillers, and any kinds of plastic treatments.
However, even though my skin is not beautiful, I don\'t want to do botox, fillers, and any kinds of plastic treatments.
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or>>However, even though my skin is not that beautiful, I don\'t want to have botox, fillers, or any kinds of plastic surgery.
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