Do you want to know what will happen in the future?
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What will happen in my life in the future? I don\'t know, but I exactly know one thing : I\'ll die, because I\'m human being and creature that must meet the death. But I live today like I live forever. I do my daily routine with joy and excitement, take care of my mother with my heart, sometimes I spend money on useless things and have bad food for my little satisfaction, even saving money. I always do many things without thought about the future that is the obvious end, death. Of course, on the way to the death, many things that I don\'t expect. If I know that or not, which would make my life better and richer? I think it depends on the situation. For example, if I could know the future of stock market, I could get a chance to make more money, it could be helpful. But if I would know my partner cheat on me in the future, it could be hard with him right now even he do nothing. it could be a disaster that I make by myself. So the key is the mindset that I can go through whatever.
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Hi!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework question I sent. I made some corrections to the sentences as well.
Anyway, I agree that the only thing we\'re certain of is that there is an end to everything. But the most important thing definitely is how we live life along the way whether we know what the future holds or not. ^^
Anyway, I agree that the only thing we\'re certain of is that there is an end to everything. But the most important thing definitely is how we live life along the way whether we know what the future holds or not. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
What will happen in my life in the future?
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: What does my future hold?
I don\'t know, but I exactly know one thing : I\'ll die, because I\'m human being and creature that must meet the death.
>> I don’t know, but I exactly know one thing: I will die, because I am a human being- a creature that must meet death.
But I live today like I live forever.
>> But I live today as if I will live forever.
I do my daily routine with joy and excitement, take care of my mother with my heart, sometimes I spend money on useless things and have bad food for my little satisfaction, even saving money.
>> I go through my daily routine with joy and excitement, take care of my mother with all my heart, and sometimes spend money on unnecessary things or eat unhealthy food for small satisfaction, even while trying to save money.
I always do many things without thought about the future that is the obvious end, death.
>> I often do many things without thinking about the future, even though I know that death is the obvious end.
Of course, on the way to the death, many things that I don\'t expect.
>> Of course, along the way to death, there are many things I don\'t expect.
If I know that or not, which would make my life better and richer?
>> If I knew them or not, which would make my life better and richer?
>> Or: Would knowing these things make my life better and richer?
I think it depends on the situation.
>> CORRECT.
For example, if I could know the future of stock market, I could get a chance to make more money, it could be helpful.
>> For example, if I could know the future of the stock market, I could have a chance to make more money, which could be helpful.
But if I would know my partner cheat on me in the future, it could be hard with him right now even he do nothing.
>> But if I knew that my partner would cheat on me in the future, it would be hard to be with him now, even if he has done nothing yet.
it could be a disaster that I make by myself.
>> It could be a disaster that I create myself.
So the key is the mindset that I can go through whatever.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: So the key is having the mindset that I can get through anything.
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