Do you want to live with best friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I‘d like to live with my best friend close.
The reason is because we can always work out and talk too much and have delicious foods together.
The first of all is what we are able to talk about everything.
Of course, I know that there is also downsides.
The more time we spend together and talk about a lot, the more difficult our relationship can be.
The conclusion is that the closer we are, the more appropriate we have to keep a distance.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I\'m glad I was able to correct this now.
We have to discuss it in our class.
Thank you for always being diligent.
I hope you\'re having a good day.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I‘d like to live with my best friend close.
>> I\'d like to live close to my best friend.
The reason is because we can always work out and talk too much and have delicious foods together.
>> The reason is because we can always work out, talk a lot and have delicious foods together.
The first of all is what we are able to talk about everything.
The first of all is what we are able to talk about everything.
>> The most important thing for me is that we can talk about everything.
Of course, I know that there is also downsides.
Of course, I know that there is also downsides.
>> Of course, I know that there is also a downside.
The more time we spend together and talk about a lot, the more difficult our relationship can be.
The more time we spend together and talk about a lot, the more difficult our relationship can be.
>> The more time we spend together and talk a lot, the more difficult our relationship can be.
The conclusion is that the closer we are, the more appropriate we have to keep a distance.
The conclusion is that the closer we are, the more appropriate we have to keep a distance.
>> The conclusion is that the closer we are, the more appropriate it is for us to keep distance.
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