Do you want to move to a different neighborhood? Where would you like to live?
학생이 쓴 원문
The place where I live now is downtown
Everything is convenient and transportation is good, but as the city center is developed, the air is not good, so it is always red.
Red is a sign of the worst air.
I can\'t keep the windows open. Fortunately, my house has a small garden, so I feel a bit fresh.
The environment is important to humans.
The place where I used to live was near the mountain, so the air was good, but other things were uncomfortable.
After moving here, I am faced with redevelopment problems and everything is convenient except for the bad atmosphere.
I have no intention of moving to another place. I think I will have to find a way to purify it artificially.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! It seems like we can\'t always have the best things. There are things that we have to make adjustments for in order to enjoy some things. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: My apartment is located in the city center.
Everything is convenient and transportation is good, but as the city center is developed, the air is not good, so it is always red.
>>Everything is convenient and transportation is good, but as the city center develops, the air quality turns bad. The indicators are always red.
Red is a sign of the worst air.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Red means that the air quality is at it\'s worst.
I can\'t keep the windows open.
>>CORRECT!
Fortunately, my house has a small garden, so I feel a bit fresh.
>>CORRECT!
The environment is important to humans.
>>CORRECT!
The place where I used to live was near the mountain, so the air was good, but other things were uncomfortable.
>>CORRECT!
After moving here, I am faced with redevelopment problems and everything is convenient except for the bad atmosphere.
>>CORRECT!
I have no intention of moving to another place. I think I will have to find a way to purify it artificially.
>>CORRECT!
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