Do you want to put up your own business? Why?
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. This is so nice. It really shows your love for art.
- T. Beth
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l want to run an art plaform.
>>>> I want to run an art platform.
It is not for earning money, It is just pleasure to me.
>>>> OR: It is not for earning money but rather just for pleasure.
The reason why I just want to exhibit without concern about a place.
>>>> The reason is I just want to exhibit without having to be concerned about the place.
When I wish to exhibit, I have to find a place which can do it.
>>>> When I wish to exhibit, I have to find a place where I can do it.
The place is not only hard to find, but also expensive.
>>>> CORRECT.
So If I have a enough money to rent a place, I want to run an art plaform.
>>>> So If I have a enough money to rent a place, I want to run an art platform.
Then I will rent the place for curators and artists who hope to exhibit but they have not enough money to pay for it.
>>>> Then I will have the place rented by curators and artists who hope to exhibit but do not have enough money to pay for it.
Maybe It will be come ture, that is very happy to me.
>>>> Maybe It will come ture, it would make me very happy.
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