Do you want to work in a medical field someday? Why or why not?

2023-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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I don\'t want to work in a medical area. It\'s hard to work in a medical field. because, it\'s required to study a lot. In Korea, the medical universities are required the most highest university pass exam points.

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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!

YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! 

-T.NIKKI



I don\'t want to work in a medical area.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don\'t want to work in a medical field.


It\'s hard to work in a medical field. because, it\'s required to study a lot.
>>  It\'s very hard to work in the medical field because it requires you to study a lot.


In Korea, the medical universities are required the most highest university pass exam points.
>> Lastly, In Korea medical universities require the highest university entrance exam score. 

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