Do you want to work on weekends? Why or why not?
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Unless I have a special schedule, I like to the chance to work on weekends.
>>Unless I have a special appointment, I like to take the chance to work on weekends.
Because I can be gave higher wage than on weekdays.
>>It is because I can be given a higher wage than on weekdays.
However, If I must work on every weekends, I will feel very tired.
>>However, if I must work every weekends, I am surely going to feel tired.
Although It helps me promote in my workplace, I don\'t want it.
>>Although it helps me to get promoted in my workplace, I still don\'t want it.
I love my freedom, so my weekends are very precious.
>>I love my freedom on weekends, so these days are precious to me.
I can many acting that I can\'t do ordinarily. For example, I can take a s[이름]p all day, go to the other countries, hang out friends or date boyfriend on weekends.
>>I can do many activities which I can\'t do in ordinary days for example, s[이름]ping all day, traveling abroad, hanging out with friends, or dating with my boyfriend on weekends.
I love s[이름]ping.
>>Correct.
I love soft and relaxed feeling on a bed.
>>I love the soft and relaxed feeling on the bed.
Although I\'m not tired, the dreams when I have s[이름]ping are make me happy.
>>Although I\'m not tired, the dreams that I have while s[이름]ping make me happy.
I\'m a little bit lazy, But I love activity too.
>>I\'m a little bit lazy, but I love doing some activities too.
The special experience memory improves me on busy weekdays, and cheer me up.
>>A special memorable experience motivates and cheers me up to work on busy weekdays.
I want to do more things always.
>>I alwasys want to do more things.
It is very much that I can\'t experience yet.
>>It is impossibe to happen.
On this summer, I hope I can play anything in the water after I\'m vaccinated for COVID-19.
>>This summer, I hope I can go swimming after I get vaccinated for Covid-19.
Unless I don\'t be vaccinated, I can\'t feel free on this vacation.
>>If I don\'t have the vaccine, I can\'t feel free this vacation.
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