Do you watch your weight? What foods do you think are healthy?
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Having easy weight change constitution, I check my weight every day.
>> Having an easy weight changing constitution, I always check my weight every day.
My bluetooth scale have write my weight when I measure my weight.
>> My Bluetooth scale writes down my weight whenever I measured it.
Sometime, I get weight up to 80 kg or lose weight under 70kg.
>> Sometimes, my weight goes up to 80kgs or goes down under 70kgs.
Becase of this reason, I am trying to keep my weight same through doing excercise.
>> Because of this reason, I am trying to keep my weight controlled by doing exercises.
I think that vegetables are good for our health. Protein based foods are good too.
>> I think that vegetables are good for our health and so does protein based foods.
So, I often eat chicken breast only for lunch at my office.
>> So, most of the time I only eat chicken breast for lunch at my office.
However tasteless of these food, I overeated every weekend.
>> Because of the bland taste of this food, I over eat during the weekend.
This is reason why i excercise more hard than weekdays.
>> This is the reason why I exercise harder than I do on weekdays.
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