Do you wish you could return to moments from your past?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I want to return the time of freshman because I could get along with many friends, seniors and juniors, and build up lots of experiences at that time, for example, could go on many trips, date with my girlfriends and attend school festivals.
강사 첨삭
Incredible, [이름]^^
All of us want to go to back to a certain time ;)
Yes, I want to return the time of freshman because I could get along with many friends, seniors and juniors,
and build up lots of experiences at that time, for example, could go on many trips, date with my girlfriends and attend school festivals.
>>Yes, I want to return to my freshman year because I could get along with many friends, seniors and juniors,
and build up lots of experiences at that time, for example, I could go on many trips, date with my girlfriends and attend school festivals.
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