Do you wish you could return to moments from your past?
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Good morning, Jason^^
Going to yesterday is a very interesting thing, isn\'t it?
It is filled with \"what if\'s\" and \"should\'ve\".
However, I believe that our choices have rational reasons^^
See you later!
First, if I came back to an elementary school, I would drink a lot of milks and play a rope skipping day by day.
>>First, if I came back to elementary school, I would drink a lot of milk and play skipping rope day by day.
Then I might become taller than now.
>>CORRECT!
Second, if I came back to a middle school, I would study hard especially Math and English.
>> Second, if I came back to middle school, I would study hard, especially Math and English.
Accordingly, I might be graduated from a well-known university.
>> Accordingly, I might have graduated from a well-known university.
Third, if I came back to a high school, I would not make any scar in her mind who was my first-ex-girlfriend.
>>Third, if I came back to high school, I would not make any scar in the mind of my first-ex-girlfriend.
Consequently, we might have got married and carried babies who had appearance similar as us.
>>Consequently, we might have gotten married and carried babies who had an appearance similar to ours.
Fourth, if I came back to before I resigned my previous company, I would ask a CEO to change my department from sales to engineering whether he agreed with me or not.
>>Fourth, if I came back to the moment before I resigned from my previous company, I would ask the CEO to change my department from sales to engineering whether he agreed with me or not.
I want to change this kind of moment and I already know it’s impossible to return.
>>CORRECT!
That’s why I like to watch movies that have stories regarding the time travelling.
>> That’s why I like to watch movies that have stories regarding time traveling.
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