Do you work out normally?(For OPIC TEST)

Normally, I start my work at 8 AM and finish that over 10 PM. In worst case I took off after midnight. So I think I have to maintain myself regulary. and try to excercise pretty hard every day. One of the things I do on a week day is stretch for 10 minutes. It make me feel relieved. and When I have more time to work out I do the muscular motions like push-ups and sit-ups. On weekend I try to catch up with all the exercises I can't do during the weekday. In the morning I go hiking and get some fresh air. And the afternoon I go to the jazz dance club with my girl friend, which is very fun and require quntity of movement. After I finish jaze dance. I have sweat all over my body. It is good for my body and the relationship with my girlfriend get better since we share the interests.

HI [이름]! Wow! You are really disciplined when it comes to keeping your body fit. I wish I am as disciplined and determined as you. Anyway, good job!^^ Min   Normally, I start my work at 8 AM and finish that over 10 PM. >>Normally, I start my work at 8 AM and finish that past 10 PM. >>Normally, I work from 8 AM to past 10 PM. In worst case I took off after midnight. >>At worst, I take off after midnight. So I think I have to maintain myself regulary. and try to excercise pretty hard every day.>>So I think I have to maintain my body and try to exercise pretty hard everyday. (‘Regularly’ is not necessary since ‘maintain’ means to do something regularly.) One of the things I do on a week day is stretch for 10 minutes. >>One of the things I do every week is stretching for 10 minutes. (Every week or everyday?^^) It make me feel relieved. >>It makes me feel relieved. and When I have more time to work out I do the muscular motions like push-ups and sit-ups.>>And when I have more time to work out, I do muscular exercises like push-ups and sit-ups. (Your sentence is actually correct but take note of the punctuations used.^^) On weekend, I try to catch up with all the exercises I can't do during the weekday. >>CORRECT. In the morning I go hiking and get some fresh air. >>In the morning, I go hiking and get some fresh air. (Or, to get some fresh air. And take note of the comma again.^^) And the afternoon I go to the jazz dance club with my girl friend, which is very fun and require quntity of movement. >>And in the afternoon, I go to the jazz dance club with my girlfriend. Jazz dance is very fun and requires a lot of movement. (‘Quantity’ means ‘amount’ so if you will use this word, add an adjective like ‘large’ quantity of…) After I finish jaze dance. I have sweat all over my body. >>After I finish jazz dancing, I have sweat all over my body. It is good for my body and the relationship with my girlfriend get better since we share the interests. >>It is good for my body and my relationship with my girlfriend has been improving since we started doing the same thing. >>It is good for my body and my relationship with my girlfriend got better because of the same interest we share.