Do you worry about cyber crime? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I worried about cybercrime.
Because, much of my information is on line.
So I really worried about hacking my information.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sharing your answer.
I also have the same sentiment as you do.
I agree that it is worrying at times especially that most of the transactions we do now are digitalized.
~ Teacher Gina
Yes. I worried about cybercrime.
Because, much of my information is on line.
So I really worried about hacking my information.
>> Yes. I am worried about cybercrime because much of my information is online.
So I was really worried about my information getting hacked.
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