Do you worry about cybercrime? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I worry about cybercrime. Because it is too hard to protect cybercrime. If a professional hacker tries to break through our cyber defenses, it will be hard to stop it. But, we should do our best to protect cybercrime. We should use reputable antivirus software to detect and remove virus from our computer or device.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U!
That\'s right! As a responsible cyber citizen it is our obligation to protect ourselves.
Again, thank you for completing your homework!
See you around~
-T.Jhozel
I worry about cybercrime.
>> Correct!
Because it is too hard to protect cybercrime.
>> Because it is too difficult to protect against cybercrime.
If a professional hacker tries to break through our cyber defenses, it will be hard to stop it.
>> Correct
OR: It will be difficult to stop a skilled hacker from breaching our cyber defenses.
But, we should do our best to protect cybercrime.
>> Correct!
OR: However, we must do everything possible to protect against cybercrime.
OR: However, we must do everything possible to protect against cybercrime.
We should use reputable antivirus software to detect and remove virus from our computer or device.
>> Correct!
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