Do you worry about global warming? How serious are the earth’s environmental problems?
학생이 쓴 원문
Earth\'s average temperature is increasing due to environmental destruction.
As Antarctic glaciers melt rapidly due to global warming, sea levels rise and the seas widen and deeper
Coastal areas are submerged and also cause abnormal climates.
Let\'s reduce the emission of carbon dioxide produced by the development of industry.
Each household reduces the use of disposables and plastics and separates them.
We must protect the environment that will be passed on to future generations.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! You have such powerful words of concern to our environment. It\'s good to know that you have much concern with this topic. Keep it up!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
As Antarctic glaciers melt rapidly due to global warming, sea levels rise and the seas widen and deeper
As Antarctic glaciers melt rapidly due to global warming, sea levels rise and the seas widen and deeper
>>As Antarctic glaciers melt rapidly due to global warming, sea levels rise and the seas widen. (\"Deeper\" can be omitted because it is already associated with rising of sea levels.)
Coastal areas are submerged and also cause abnormal climates.
Coastal areas are submerged and also cause abnormal climates.
>>CORRECT!
Let\'s reduce the emission of carbon dioxide produced by the development of industry.
Let\'s reduce the emission of carbon dioxide produced by the development of industry.
>>CORRECT!
Each household reduces the use of disposables and plastics and separates them.
Each household reduces the use of disposables and plastics and separates them.
>>CORRECT!
We must protect the environment that will be passed on to future generations.
We must protect the environment that will be passed on to future generations.
>>CORRECT!
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