Do you worry about your health when you eat salty, sugary, and fatty food?
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever I choose to eat savory and greasy dishes, I rarely take health into consideration. Since I am more grown-up, I need to take responsibility for every action. Usually, I choose to eat seemingly unhealthy options to relieve stress and reward myself for an achievement. Also, I would instead choose the nutritious option for healthier options. Since there are always reasons, I do not regret not getting wholesome food. If I find greener options seem more suitable, I will choose to eat healthier meals. For example, I was recently diagnosed with taking too many carbohydrates for meals and was advised to increase the level of vegetables for more fiber intake. Accordingly, I voluntarily reduced the rice and bread for each meal. I realized from previous experiences being overly concerned would be another cause of stress. Also, I must control my nutrition intake for each meal as an adult. Therefore, I am not worried about not having unhealthy options for every meal.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Aciel!
Whenever I choose to eat savory and greasy dishes, I rarely take health into consideration.
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Since I am more grown-up, I need to take responsibility for every action.
>>> OR: Since I am already a grown-up, I need to take responsibility for every action.
Usually, I choose to eat seemingly unhealthy options to relieve stress and reward myself for an achievement.
>>> correct
Also, I would instead choose the nutritious option for healthier options.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Also, I would instead choose the delicious option over healthier options.
Since there are always reasons, I do not regret not getting wholesome food.
>>> correct
If I find greener options seem more suitable, I will choose to eat healthier meals.
>>> correct
For example, I was recently diagnosed with taking too many carbohydrates for meals and was advised to increase the level of vegetables for more fiber intake.
>>> correct
Accordingly, I voluntarily reduced the rice and bread for each meal.
>>> correct
I realized from previous experiences being overly concerned would be another cause of stress.
>>> correct
Also, I must control my nutrition intake for each meal as an adult.
>>> correct
Therefore, I am not worried about not having unhealthy options for every meal.
>>> correct
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