Do younger and older generations have different shopping habits?
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Yes, they have differnet shopping habits.
Normally, it depends on each indivisual.
But younger gererations usually go shopping online by using online shopping shop or sns.
Also, they compare the price of the things they want to buy, and they try to choose the cheatest one.
Moreover, they check the review of the products.
As for older generations, they usually prefer going off-line shop to shopping online.
They seem to like to watch the products in realit and in person, and want to try on physically.
They feel hard to use application for shopping.
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Yes, they have differnet shopping habits.
>> Yes, they have different shopping habits.
Normally, it depends on each indivisual.
>> Correct
But younger gererations usually go shopping online by using online shopping shop or sns.
>> However, younger generations usually shop online using shopping application or SNS.
Also, they compare the price of the things they want to buy, and they try to choose the cheatest one.
>> Also, they compare the prices of the things they want to buy and try to choose the cheapest one.
Moreover, they check the review of the products.
>> Moreover, they check product reviews.
As for older generations, they usually prefer going off-line shop to shopping online.
>> As for older generations, they usually prefer going to offline stores to shopping online.
They seem to like to watch the products in realit and in person, and want to try on physically.
>> They like to see the products in person and try them physically.
They feel hard to use application for shopping.
>> They find it hard to use shopping applications.
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