Do your consumption habits destroy the habitats of other species?

2018-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Today,the topic is tricky question for me as well.But let me give it a try.In the past,I think that I never have experienced destroy the other species ever before.So, I really thought about that question deeply for a while when I got the homework today.Now,I'm using various kinds of plastic products such as cup, straw, toys for kids, pencils and so on.As you already knew, according to science report, the plastic is not disintergrated in the eco-system.So, it could be influencing on other species in the eco-system.I think that especially fishes in the ocean.In my case, I never throw those plastic items away. Besides, I really take those items out in a designated area in my apartment complex becase I am trying not to damage for eco-system.I am recycling practiced well to protect natural and save the limited resources on the earth.I also want to live together with other species on the earth in the future.So,I will try to recycling the items and protect to the earth continuosly.That's it.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Tiger!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

Talk to you on Wednesday ☺


Today,the topic is tricky question for me as well.But let me give it a try.

>> Today, the topic is tricky for me as well but let me give it a try.


In the past,I think that I never have experienced destroy the other species ever before.

>> I have never thought of destroying species in the past.


So, I really thought about that question deeply for a while when I got the homework today.

>> CORRECT


Now,I\'m using various kinds of plastic products such as cup, straw, toys for kids, pencils and so on.

>> Now, I am using various kinds of plastic products such as cup, straw, toys for kids, pencils and so on.


As you already knew, according to science report, the plastic is not disintergrated in the eco-system.

>> As you already knew, according to the science report, plastic is non-biodegradable.


So, it could be influencing on other species in the eco-system.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: So, it could affect on other species in the eco-system.


I think that especially fishes in the ocean.

>> Especially the marine animals in the ocean.


In my case, I never throw those plastic items away. 

>> CORRECT


Besides, I really take those items out in a designated area in my apartment complex becase I am trying not to damage for eco-system.

>> Besides, I really take those items out in a designated area in my apartment complex because I am trying not to damage our eco-system.


I am recycling practiced well to protect natural and save the limited resources on the earth.

>> I am practicing on recycling well to protect natural and save the limited resources on the earth.


I also want to live together with other species on the earth in the future.

>> CORRECT


So,I will try to recycling the items and protect to the earth continuosly.

>> So, I will try to recycle the items and protect the earth continuously.


That\'s it.

>> CORRECT

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