Do your parents make you do chores? If yes, which chores do you do?(ANSWER)

2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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My family usually don't make me do chores. Because I can't do chores well. Also, when I help my mom's chores, It always be mess. So I only clean my room and my sister's room. Actually, I want to wash dishes. But my mom says "Stay still. You'll make it mess." :( -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Do your parents make you do chores? If yes, which chores do you do?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

My family usually don\'t make me do chores.
Because I can\'t do chores well.
Also, when I help my mom\'s chores, It always be mess.
So I only clean my room and my sister\'s room.
Actually, I want to wash dishes. But my mom says \"Stay still. You\'ll make it mess.\"
:(

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CORRECTIONS:

 

My family usually don\'t make me do chores.
Because I can\'t do chores well.
Also, when I help
with my mom\'s chores, it’s always a mess.
So
, I only clean my room and my sister\'s room.
Actually, I want to wash dishes. But my mom says
, \"Stay still. You\'ll make it a mess.\" :( 

 


** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Well done! You only have a few mistakes. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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