doctors
학생이 쓴 원문
We already have provincial hospitals in each province.
The problem is that most people prefer to see a doctors big hospitals in Seoul.
Even provincial hospitals suffer from financial difficulities and increase some clinics and hospitals become closed down.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this! Are the facilities in provincial hospitals not enough that make people go and see doctors in Seoul?
Let\'s talk about it later.
Aki~
We already have provincial hospitals in each province.
>>> CORRECT!
The problem is that most people prefer to see a doctors big hospitals in Seoul.
>>> The problem is that most people prefer to see a doctor in big hospitals in Seoul.
Even provincial hospitals suffer from financial difficulities and increase some clinics and hospitals become closed down.
>>> Even provincial hospitals suffer from financial difficulties and some clinics and hospitals closed down.
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