Dodge ball mass

2014-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Winnie

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At school we do dodge ball mass. I compete with my best friend`s class. I`m not good at throwing but I`m good at catch ball and avoiding. Our class consist of twenty six but the other class consist of thirty, so we loosed dodge ball mass. Our classmate and my teacher thought we will win. I thought our class were winner because we were good ant dodge ball.

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Hi there [이름], Thank you for writting an essay about the game that you play. I think you really enjoy this game. Great! ~Teacher Winnie~     At school we do dodge ball mass. >> We do a dodge ball mass at school.I compete with my best friend`s class. >> I compete with my bestfriend\'s classmates.I`m not good at throwing but I`m good at catch ball and avoiding. >> I\'m not good at throwing the ball but I\'m good at catching and avoiding the ball.Our class consist of twenty six but the other class consist of thirty, so we loosed dodge ball mass. >> Our class was consist of twenty six and the other class was consist of thirty so we lose the game. Our classmate and my teacher thought we will win. >> My classmates and my teacher thought we will win.I thought our class were winner because we were good ant dodge ball. >> I thought that our class would win because we\'re good at playing dodge ball.

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