Does a novelist need imagination?
학생이 쓴 원문
In order to become a novelist, you need imagination. It is natural to conceive a story, and it is also necessary to think of specific things, such as what the background of the novel looks like.
강사 첨삭
In order to become a novelist, you need imagination.
>> CORRECT
It is natural to conceive a story, and it is also necessary to think of specific things, such as what the background of the novel looks like.
>> It is natural to conceive a story, but it is also necessary to think about specific details, such as what the setting of the novel looks like.
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