Does age make you more aware of and caring for others?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think when I get older, I get to know and take care of others better.
This is because the amount and depth of knowledge you gain with age cannot be ignored.
As we get older, we experience many different kinds of people.
The experience and knowledge you gain from doing so will be more than those who are younger.
We often refer to is as years of experience, and I think it\'s like the ability of craftsman to pass on the secrets.
You will be able to handle it wisely based on that experience and knowledge.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]~
You were correct; as we get older, the experiences we have sharpen our skills and knowledge. It also has an impact on our maturity and personality development. ^^
Chammy
I think when I get older, I get to know and take care of others better.
>> I think, as I get older, the more I get to know and take care of others better.
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>> I believe I grow to know and care for people better as I age.
This is because the amount and depth of knowledge you gain with age cannot be ignored.
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>> This is because growing older brings a wealth of information that cannot be disregarded.
As we get older, we experience many different kinds of people.
OR
>> As we age, we encounter a wide variety of individuals.
The experience and knowledge you gain from doing so will be more than those who are younger.
OR
>> By doing this, you will acquire more experience and expertise than younger people.
We often refer to is as years of experience, and I think it\'s like the ability of craftsman to pass on the secrets.
>> We often refer to it as years of experience, and I think it\'s like the ability of a craftsman to pass on the secrets
You will be able to handle it wisely based on that experience and knowledge.
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>> You gain wisdom as you apply your experience and knowledge to it.
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