Does an age difference make it difficult to be friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe an age difference is not difficult to make friends with. This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their character not their age. I can attest to my opinion through my experience. When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who is 30 years old man. I went to the bar and fortunately I met him. He asked me what is my major and what I want to be future. He gave me pretty much good advice and I could bark in my mind. Honestly, his advice had affected me until now. It shows me that difference is not difficult to make friends with.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름] [이름]! It might also be a personal preference. For some people and cultures, it is unusual or may seem awkward to have a friendly relationship with people who are not your age. However, I have observed that people are becoming more open-minded to the idea.
-T. Sonny
I believe an age difference is not difficult to make friends with.
>>I believe that an age difference does not make it difficult to make friends.
This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their character not their age.
>>This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their characters, not their age.
I can attest to my opinion through my experience.
>>Correct!
When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who is 30 years old man.
>>When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who was a 30-year-old man.
I went to the bar and fortunately I met him.
>>I went to a bar and fortunately, I met him there.
He asked me what is my major and what I want to be future.
>>He asked me what my major was and what I wanted to be in the future.
He gave me pretty much good advice and I could bark in my mind.
>>He gave me pretty good advice and I could bark in my mind.
Honestly, his advice had affected me until now.
>>Honestly, his advice has affected me until now.
It shows me that difference is not difficult to make friends with.
>>It showed me that age difference does not make it difficult to make friends.
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