Does art chane the way you think or feel?

2013-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Risa

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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY: Does art change the way you think or feel? My answer is "Yes". Art is a creature of the human's sprit. For example, art is including of human's happiness, sadness, anxiety, anger, and the like. So art can make someone's thinking and feeling change. Art make you smile, art make you sad, art make you concern, art make you cry. I think art is a mixture of human's life. It is all of the around the corner our life and it affect all the way you think or feel.

강사 첨삭

Sir Charles, this is a very nice essay. 

I like the ideas you shared. 

I agree with everything you wrote: art is a reflection of our lives. 

Let\'s talk more about this later. :)


Cheers,

T.Risa


My answer is \"Yes\".

>> Correct

>> My answer is yes.


Art is a creature of the human\'s sprit.

>> Art is created by the human spirit.


For example, art is including of human\'s happiness, sadness, anxiety, anger, and the like.

>> For example, art expresses happiness, sadness, anxiety, anger and the like.


So art can make someone\'s thinking and feeling change.

>> So art can change someone\'s thinking and feelings.


Art make you smile, art make you sad, art make you concern, art make you cry.

>> Art can make you smile; art can make you sad; art can make you feel concern; art can make you cry.


I think art is a mixture of human\'s life.

>> I think art is a expression of human life.


It is all of the around the corner our life and it affect all the way you think or feel.

>> It is in every corner of our lives and it can affect how we think and feel.

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