Does art chane the way you think or feel?
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Sir Charles, this is a very nice essay.
I like the ideas you shared.
I agree with everything you wrote: art is a reflection of our lives.
Let\'s talk more about this later. :)
Cheers,
T.Risa
My answer is \"Yes\".
>> Correct
>> My answer is yes.
Art is a creature of the human\'s sprit.
>> Art is created by the human spirit.
For example, art is including of human\'s happiness, sadness, anxiety, anger, and the like.
>> For example, art expresses happiness, sadness, anxiety, anger and the like.
>> So art can change someone\'s thinking and feelings.
>> Art can make you smile; art can make you sad; art can make you feel concern; art can make you cry.
>> I think art is a expression of human life.
It is all of the around the corner our life and it affect all the way you think or feel.
>> It is in every corner of our lives and it can affect how we think and feel.
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