Does beauty affect one\'s success in life?

Hi Su ^^

At least in Korea, it does. So to speak, beauty is regarded as one of the prerequisites of success in Korea.

>>> correct

When the people have same condition, then beauty has more adventage.

>>> When a person has the same condition, then they have more advantages than others.

I can give you a whole lot of example from the mass media, but let me give you an example.

>>> Let me give you an example.

Few month ago, an artist made a guest appearance in TV show and he sprung into fame because he is hansome.

>>> A few months ago, an artist made a guest appearance in a TV show and he sprung into fame because he is handsome.

I don’t know well about his artworks, but I surely believe the nice look have an effect on his reputation.

>>> I don\'t know well about his artworks but I surely believe that his looks had an effect on his reputation.

When I search on the internet, I can only see the picture of his face, not the art pieces.

>>> correct

The situation of real entertainers is also same.

>>> The situation of real entertainers are also the same.

The prettiest girl group win the top ranking.

>>> The prettiest girl group wins the top ranking.

In my opinion, we need to value more their effort and ability not only their superficies.

>>> In my opinion, we need to value efforts and one\'s ability and not only their superficies.