Does believing in superstitions save you from bad luck?
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I don\'t belive superstition. Some Korean love superstition, so they visit a shame, when they are going to do something. But I have a little trust about saju. I think that saju iisn\'t shamen, is a science. I don\'t know how to expain about saju. Saju\'s principle is very complicated. Saju theater said we can guess one\'s future about 70%.
I think that we don\'t have to depend on shamen or saju. I can make my future. More important things are to have to my work now.
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I don\'t belive superstition.
>>> I don\'t believe in superstition.
Some Korean love superstition, so they visit a shame, when they are going to do something. But I have a little trust about saju.
>>> Some Koreans love superstition, so they visit a shrine when they are going to do something. But I have a little trust in saju.
I think that saju iisn\'t shamen, is a science. I don\'t know how to expain about saju.
>>> I think that saju isn\'t a shaman, it\'s a science. I don\'t know how to explain saju.
Saju\'s principle is very complicated. Saju theater said we can guess one\'s future about 70%.
>>> Saju\'s principle is very complicated. Saju Theater said we can guess one\'s future about 70%.
I think that we don\'t have to depend on shamen or saju.
>>> I think that we don\'t have to depend on shamans or saju.
I can make my future.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I can create my future.
More important things are to have to my work now.
>>> More important things are to have to my work now.
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