Does distant learning make it easier for students to balance their everyday lives? How? Explain your

2020-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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First of all, I would like to know what the differences are between e-learning and distant learning. I am not sure if these are the way to educate students by using computer such as Youtube apps. There are a lot of advantages of e-learning under the novel virus pandemic. Students can\'t go to the school these day because of the risk of infection. Government and the Ministry of Education have implemented the e-learning into the school so students can communicate with their teacher. However, teachers were not prepared well because it has started without any preparation. Many teachers at schools were not familiar with computer and they haven\'t any experience to record video contents. They might feel awkward while they are recording video clips. Furthermore, if the online class provide the function communicating with their teachers, it would be better but if it is just one way class, I guess that many students would not focus on the class. I heard that many of them did other things.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
First of all, I would like to know what the differences are between e-learning and distant learning. 
>>> First of all, I would like to know what the differences between e-learning and distant learning. 
I am not sure if these are the way to educate students by using computer such as Youtube apps. 
>>> I am not sure if these are the ways to educate students by using computer such as Youtube apps.
There are a lot of advantages of e-learning under the novel virus pandemic.
>>> CORRECT 
Students can\'t go to the school these day because of the risk of infection. 
>>> Students can\'t go to school these day because of the risk of being infected.
Government and the Ministry of Education have implemented the e-learning into the school so students can communicate with their teachers.
>>> CORRECT 
 However, teachers were not prepared well because it has started without enough preparations. 
>>> CORRECT 
Many teachers at schools were not familiar with computers and they haven\'t any experience to record video contents.
>>> Many teachers at schools were not familiar with computers and they don\'t have any experiences to record video learning contents.
 They might feel awkward while they are recording video clips.
>>> CORRECT 
 Furthermore, if the online class provides the function of communicating with their teachers, it would be better but if it is just a one way class, I guess that many students would not focus on the class.
>>> CORRECT
 I heard that many of them do other things.
>>> CORRECT

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