Does economic status affect people's behavior?

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Yes. Economic status always affect people\'s behavior. And people\'s behavior affects economic status as well.

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>> OR: Yes, I believed that economic status affect people\'s behavior.

If someone have enough money, they are more generous. Otherwise they are more stingy.

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>> OR: Someone with more money are more likely to be generous, otherwise, they are stingy.

If someone have enough money. They can buy more clothes to make themselves up. 

>>If someone have enough money, they can buy more clothes to make themselves up. 

>> OR: People with more money can afford to buy clothes to make themselves comfortable and presentable.

 If someone have enough money when severe cold. They can warm their place up.
>> During winter or when the weather is extremely cold, someone with enough money can afford to warm their place up.

Then they can enjoy warm air. Then they can be more kind. Otherwise, people tend to be annoyed.

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Some people don\'t care how much they got. For example, monk, nun, priest don`t care how much they got.

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>> OR: Some people don\'t care how much they got, like the monks, nuns, priest, and others.

However, I think most of people are affected by money, authority, honor.

>> However, I think most people are affected by money and power.