Does everyone have equal job opportunities in your country?
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Well, sometime I think so, but sometimes I don\'t think so. I think Korea is the one of the countries that give equal job opportunities people but it seems that it quite depends on their background. For example, poor person and rich person has same opportunities to get a job. But considering that their background like family, economic power and so on, it seems clear that rich person can easily get a job than poor person. Maybe it\'s an inevitable problem in capitalism society but I think the government should try to solve this problem.
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Well, sometime I think so, but sometimes I don\'t think so.
>> Well, sometimes I think so, but sometimes I don\'t.
I think Korea is the one of the countries that give equal job opportunities people but it seems that it quite depends on their background.
>> I think Korea is one of the countries that give equal job opportunities to people but it seems that it quite depends on their background.
For example, poor person and rich person has same opportunities to get a job.
>> For example, a poor person and a rich person have the same opportunities to get a job.
But considering that their background like family, economic power and so on, it seems clear that rich person can easily get a job than poor person.
>> But considering their background like family, economic power and so on, it seems clear that a rich person can easily get a job than a poor person.
Maybe it\'s an inevitable problem in capitalism society but I think the government should try to solve this problem.
>> Maybe it\'s an inevitable problem in a capitalist society but I think the government should try to solve this problem.
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