Does having a lot of money make someone more attractive? Is money really the root of all evil?

I agree with the fact that having a lot of money makes someone look different. It can make people more attractive. If you have money, you can decorate yourself with luxurious clothes and accessories. You can undergo a plastic surgery, correct your teeth and get an expensive skin care every day to look better. Looking at actress. They spend a large amount of money on their appearance. It cannot be deniable that if you are rich, you are prettier than the poor. Even if you do not wear expensive cloths, you look confident and assured if you have money. Is money really the root of all evil? Actually it isn’t. Money itself is not the cause of all the problems in our society. Greed is the root of all evil. If money did not exist, people would fight over other forms of assets like land, food, weapons, etc. as ancient people did. We are never satisfied with what we have. We want more and more. Even the richest people never stops and look for a way to make more money.

I totally agree with your opinions stated below, Sir [이름]! Money makes the world go round and it also helps people to look great. Some people say that it is not good to be contented with what we have. It is because there are more opportunites, great things that will happen to us. Do you agree? You can tell me about it in class. An impressive composition again. ^^ I really love your essays. ^^Teacher Nina   I agree with the fact that having a lot of money makes someone look different. >> Correct It can make people more attractive. >> Correct If you have money, you can decorate yourself with luxurious clothes and accessories. >> Correct You can undergo a plastic surgery, correct your teeth and get an expensive skin care every day to look better. >> Correct Looking at actress. >> Looking at an actress. They spend a large amount of money on their appearance. >> Correct >> OR: They spend a huge amount of money for their physical appearance. It cannot be deniable that if you are rich, you are prettier than the poor. >> It\'s undeniable that if you are rich, you are prettier than the poor. >> OR: It can\'t be denied that if you are rich, you are prettier than the poor. Even if you do not wear expensive cloths, you look confident and assured if you have money. >> Correct (spelling check: clothes ^^) Is money really the root of all evil? >> Correct Actually it isn’t. >> Correct Money itself is not the cause of all the problems in our society. >> Correct Greed is the root of all evil. >> Correct If money did not exist, people would fight over other forms of assets like land, food, weapons, etc. as ancient people did. >> Correct We are never satisfied with what we have. >> Correct We want more and more. >> Correct >> OR: We are asking for more. Even the richest people never stops and look for a way to make more money. >> Correct >> OR: Even the richest peole never stops to look for ways to earn more money.