Does it bother you that people gamble on sporting events?
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Good evening Sir [이름]!
thank you so much for your time.^^
What a perfect composition! I am so proud of you!
Gambling really destroys relationships.
I totally agree with your opinions below.
I think this topic would be great in our class too.
Take a lot of rest this weekend. See you!
Teacher Nina
I’m not against making a bet on sports games.
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Actually we can more enjoy a game by making a bet.
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When you play sports games, making a bet can help you concentrate on the game.
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>> OR: When you play sports games, you can concentrate on the game more by making a bet.
There are no other stronger stimulators to make games exciting than making a bet.
>> There is no other stronger stimulator to make games exciting than making a bet.
When we bet money, lunch, or ice cream on playing pool, soccer, or tennis, you will be surprised by looking at yourself how the level of your focus gets intensified.
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There were many incidents of killing friends even among friends while playing golf due to the bet.
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Gambling could be different from making a bet.
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The side effect of gambling is enormous.
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You can be easily addicted to gambling.
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Once you are addicted, you can lose everything you have such as money, house, your social status, and even your family.
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It will destroy your whole life.
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You might start gambling with small amount of money at first for fun, but when you do it repeatedly, you wouldn’t be able to quit gambling.
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So, do not even try from the begining.
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