Does it need to go to school before the age of seven?
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In modern society, I don\'t think children need to go to school before the age of seven, because they attend childcare institutions such as kindergartens at an earlier age. Childcare institutions like kindergartens are also places where children can experience group life and receive an education.
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In modern society, I don\'t think children need to go to school before the age of seven, because they attend childcare institutions such as kindergartens at an earlier age.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Childcare institutions like kindergartens are also places where children can experience group life and receive an education.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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