Does it upset you when you see homeless people?
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Does it upset you when you see homeless people?
No, I do not feel upset, but I make myself a promise not to be like them.
To some extent, I will be curious about the reason why they became homeless.
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No, I do not feel upset, but I make myself a promise not to be like them.
>> No, I do not feel upset, but I make a promise to myself that I will not be like them.
To some extent, I will be curious about the reason why they became homeless.
>> CORRECT
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