Does motivation come from inside a person or their environment? why do you thing so?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think, motivation come from their environment
Of course, if someone has a passion, it seems to come from his inside. People say his passion made his success. But where is his passion come from?
I think, his passion come from an environment.
A environment give a motivation to him.
A difficult situation is very important to feel change something of my action.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Of course, if someone has a passion, it seems to come from his inside.
I think, his passion come from an environment.
A environment give a motivation to him.
A difficult situation is very important to feel change something of my action.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think, motivation come from their environment
>> I think motivation comes from a person\'s environment
Of course, if someone has a passion, it seems to come from his inside.
>> Of course, if someone has a passion, it seems to come from inside.
People say his passion made his success.
>> People will say his passion made him successful.
But where is his passion come from?
>> CORRECT!
I think, his passion come from an environment.
>> I think, his passion came from his environment.
A environment give a motivation to him.
>> His environment gave him the motivation to be a success.
A difficult situation is very important to feel change something of my action.
>> A difficult situation is very important to feel the change of something in my action.
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