Does nature shape our personalities more than nurture?
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Good evening, Sir [이름]!
I am glad to hear from you today through your composition.
In my opinion both have an influence on the type of person we will become.
We should be thankful for every experience we have.
We learn and make mistakes at the same time.
People around us help us become weaker or stronger.
We should always be optimistic.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
Nature vs. Nurture is a widely debated topic.
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The nature vs. nurture issue has to do with whether biology shapes who we are or environment.
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Biology is the nature side and environment is the nurture side.
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There are many people who agree with one of the sides over the other while some people believe that both have an influence on the type of person we will become.
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However, most contemporary psychologists feel both have an effect on us.
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Have you ever wondered if you fear something because it is natural for humans to fear it or do you fear it because society has taught you that you should fear it?
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Have you ever wondered why you may have the same attitude as a family member, is it because of genetics or the fact that you have grown up with this person in your life?
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Many questions like these have forced us to wonder what the real cause of all of this is.
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I think that both will affect us in forming personalities.
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However, nurture will play a much greater role in building our personalities.
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