does obtaining an award at school matter?
학생이 쓴 원문
If it is related to my major or job, it can be said that it is important to receive an award at school.
It may be thought of as a simple specification, but I think that the process of trying to receive an award is important.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Yun~
I believe that school awards don\'t really matter in real life but personally, they can bring you pride and help you boost your confidence. Hopefully, people are not just after the recognition they can get to avoid competition.
Chammy
If it is related to my major or job, it can be said that it is important to receive an award at school.
OR
>> If it has something to do with my field or career, then it\'s essential to obtain school recognition.
It may be thought of as a simple specification, but I think that the process of trying to receive an award is important.
OR
>>It may seem like a simple standard to some, but I believe the effort you put into earning the awards is worthwhile.
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