Does playing with dolls like Barbie negatively influence a girl’s body image?

2021-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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My opinion is Yes. When I watch Barbie animation series with my daughter, I always worry about a prejudice of human. Barbie is a white person, and she is a perfect Sometime my daughter said that \"I want to be Barbie\". She has thought about that white people are perfect and righteous. A company which makes Barbie dolls never makes Asian Barbies. So I never gave Barbie dolls to her.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]ny! :)
Thank you for writing an essay regarding this issue. I was in awe while reading it.
It\'s true that toys have impact in a child\'s way of thinking.
Young girls often think that Barbie has the perfect image and that\'s how a girl is supposed to look like which is not necessarily true.
Because there\'s no such thing as Asian Barbie, Asian girls often think that they are not pretty and are pressured to look like \"Barbie\".
I hope this changes.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry

My opinion is Yes.
>> In my opinion, it is true.
When I watch Barbie animation series with my daughter, I always worry about a prejudice of human.
>> When I watch the Barbie animation series with my daughter, I always worry about the prejudice on a girl\'s body image.
Barbie is a white person, and she is a perfect
>> Barbie has fair skin and she is perfect.
OR >> Barbie looks like a Caucasian and looks perfect.
Sometime my daughter said that \"I want to be Barbie\".
>> Sometimes, my daughter says that she wants to be Barbie.
She has thought about that white people are perfect and righteous.
>> She thinks that Caucasian people are perfect and righteous.
A company which makes Barbie dolls never makes Asian Barbies.
>> The company which makes Barbie dolls never makes Asian Barbies.
So I never gave Barbie dolls to her.
>> CORRECT!

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