Does society only allow men to propose in your country or are things changing?

2016-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Although it is still customary that a man is supposed to propose, things are changing.More and more women are getting aggressive in expressing their thoughts in the man and woman relationship.It was almost regarded as a taboo for a woman to propose at any circumstances. However, as women’s voice is getting louder and gender equality is getting emphasized in all aspects of our life, a woman feels less shameful or humiliated even if her proposal is not accepted. I personally think that it doesn’t matter who propose first. We sometimes need to listen to our heart, not following what our brain says, especially in love relationships. There is nothing to lose even if your proposal is not accepted. Yes, you can suffer from some emotional impact for a while when things don’t go well. However, it’s much better than not even trying. If you don’t try, you will get nothing and will regret later.But if you try, there is a possibility of winning his heart or at least you can set your direction.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]! Finally, our most awaited day arrived. I admire you for sharing your ideas in class. Have you experienced seeing a girl propose to a guy in Korea? You can share your ideas in class. Teacher Nina   Although it is still customary that a man is supposed to propose, things are changing. >> correct More and more women are getting aggressive in expressing their thoughts in the man and woman relationship. >> correct It was almost regarded as a taboo for a woman to propose at any circumstances. >> correct However, as women’s voice is getting louder and gender equality is getting emphasized in all aspects of our life, a woman feels less shameful or humiliated even if her proposal is not accepted. >> correct I personally think that it doesn’t matter who propose first. >> correct We sometimes need to listen to our heart, not following what our brain says, especially in love relationships. >> correct There is nothing to lose even if your proposal is not accepted. >> correct Yes, you can suffer from some emotional impact for a while when things don’t go well. >> correct However, it’s much better than not even trying. >> correct If you don’t try, you will get nothing and will regret later. >> correct But if you try, there is a possibility of winning his heart or at least you can set your direction. >> correct

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