Does South Korea have many immigrants? Share your answer in a few sentences.
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Korea is known for a closed society like Japan, and English is EFL. There are also still an uncomfortable feeling of foreginers between native koreans. These factors lead Korea to be a homogeneous nation, so its immigrants ratio belongs to the lowest among OECD countries.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Judy!
The uncomfortable feeling of one country\'s nationals over anothers is natural since they do not possess similar cultures. Maybe we have thought this way for a very long time. On the contrary, we are all human beings who have the same universal feelings of love, peace, happiness, anger, and the like. Hence, having immigrants may be a new phenomenon or an old idea depending on the country we are in but we need to the into the common things we have and less of the things that are not the same.
Thank you for this truthful answer, great job!
See you in a few.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
There are also still an uncomfortable feeling of foreginers between native koreans.
>> There are also still uncomfortable feelings of foreginers between native Koreans.
These factors lead Korea to be a homogeneous nation, so its immigrants ratio belongs to the lowest among OECD countries.
>> Correct!
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