Does stress affect your ability to make good decisions?
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I definitely think that a sufficient amount of stress can help us boost our abilities~
However, we have to remember that its excessive amount can also destroy us.
Have a great day, Jason! See you later!
Some examples as below.
>>Some examples are stated below.
First, I am studying English because of the stress.
>>First, I am studying English because of stress.
While I worked in Malaysia, I got hard time especially in the meeting with foreigners since I couldn’t understand clearly.
>>While I worked in Malaysia, I got a hard time especially meeting foreigners since I couldn’t understand them clearly.
Thus, I decided to study hard and it has been improved but, sadly, not yet enough to communicate fluently with them.
>> Thus, I decided to study hard and it has been improved but, sadly, not yet enough to communicate fluently with them.
However, at least, I can complain well now when I feel unfair.
>>CORRECT!
Second, I have achieved licenses since I had got a stress about finances.
>>Second, I have achieved licenses since I had got stress about finances.
Furthermore, I wanted to prove my abilities to my ex-girlfriend for revenge that I could live without her well.
>> Furthermore, I wanted to prove my abilities to my ex-girlfriend as revenge that I could live without her well.
Anyhow, it has given me plenty of opportunities to submit resumes and have interviews although she didn’t interested what I did and had.
>>Anyhow, it has given me plenty of opportunities to submit resumes and have interviews although she wasn’t interested in what I did and had.
Third, when I feel nervous owing to the stress of an interview, I prepare for a practicing it.
>>Third, when I feel nervous owing to the stress of an interview, I practice to prepare for it.
And it would help me if interviewers asked me the questions what I expected.
>>And it would help me if interviewers asked me the questions that I expected.
Anyway, if I don\'t have any stress, I might feel boring for a living.
>>Anyway, if I don\'t have any stress, I might feel bored for a living.
Hence, stress influences me an improvement.
>> Hence, stress influences me to make an improvement.
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