Does stress make it hard for you to think or act? How can you judge what is the right amount of stre
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Stress, when it\'s chronic or repeated OR little or much, does more than unnerve us.
>> Stress, when it\'s chronic, repeated, little or much, does more than unnerve us.
It can make us physically sick.
>> Correct!
It dampens the immune system and dries out the digestive tract, setting the stage for disorders from irritable bowel syndrome to ulcerative colitis.
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It impairs memory and in extreme cases fuels anxiety.
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It can even gnaw away at the ends of chromosomes, thereby accelerating cellular aging.
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But, it may come as a surprise to learn that this villain is also, paradoxically, a wellspring of life.
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Without stress, we\'d be as good as dead.
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That\'s because stress in appropriate amounts is the very stimulation that keeps us engaged with the world moment to moment.
>> Did you mean: That\'s because stress in appropriate amounts is stimulates that keeps us engaged with the world from moment to moment.
Our goal isn\'t a life without stress.
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The idea is to have the right amount of stress.
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That means stressors that are short-lived and manageable.
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Yet there is no uniform right amount of stress.
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What matters most regarding health and even longevity is not the event itself but how we response to it and how we perceive it.
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