Does struggling for something make you strive for more or makes you quit?

2021-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I\'m rather the type of person who struggles to achieve when I encounter difficulties or obstacles. Things that are too easy to solve or that anyone can do are not a motivating factor for me. People can take different attitudes depending on their personalities and environment, but I think the purpose of life is to solve these hardships.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름], I am impressed with your dedication today ^^.. Keep it up
~Aki :)
I\'m rather the type of person who struggles to achieve when I encounter difficulties or obstacles.
 >>> CORRECT!
OR >>>  I am the kind of person who struggles to achieve rather than quit whenever I face difficulties or hindrances.
Things that are too easy to solve or that anyone can do are not a motivating factor for me. 
 >>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Things that are not challenging are not motivating factors for me.
People can take different attitudes depending on their personalities and environment, but I think the purpose of life is to solve these hardships.
 >>> CORRECT!
OR >>>  People may have a different frame of mind depending on their personality and environment. but I guess the purpose of life is to decipher these difficulties.

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