Does the place you live have a low-stress environment?

2014-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My workplace is relatively better than others. Although we sometimes get stressed to achieve our business goals, we fairly have good working conditions, reasonable salary and benefit programs. We can take a paid leave whenever we would like to and go home early without working overtime. We do not stay late in the office until our boss leave first, which is still quite common in other companies, unless there is work to finish today. Most of team managers and directors are kind and generous and you are treated with respect. However, speaking of the whole Korean society, it is tough for you to live in Korea. We do not have much natural resources and the driver for economic development is human resources. It means that competition is fierce due to large population with the small number of jobs available. In order for you to survive, you need to study hard from even kindergarten. To enter a good college, we have to study virtually all day except sleeping time. To relieve stress, I excercise

강사 첨삭

A marvelous day to you Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for sending this in today.

How is the weather in your city? Is it cold?

I hope that you will find time to relive your stress these days.

Take care!
Teacher Nina


My workplace is relatively better than others.

>> correct

Although we sometimes get stressed to achieve our business goals, we fairly have good working conditions, reasonable salary and benefit programs.

>> correct

We can take a paid leave whenever we would like to and go home early without working overtime.

>> correct

We do not stay late in the office until our boss leave first, which is still quite common in other companies, unless there is work to finish today.

>> We don\'t stay late in the office until our boss leaves first, which is still quite common in other companies unless there is work to finish today.

Most of team managers and directors are kind and generous and you are treated with respect.

>> correct

However, speaking of the whole Korean society, it is tough for you to live in Korea.

>> correct ( tough ^^)

We do not have much natural resources and the driver for economic development is human resources.

>> correct

It means that competition is fierce due to large population with the small number of jobs available.

>> correct

>> OR: It means that competition is fierce due to the large population with few jobs available.

In order for you to survive, you need to study hard from even kindergarten.

>> In order for you to survive, you need to study hard even if you are still in the kindergarten.

To enter a good college, we have to study virtually all day except sleeping time.

>> To enter a good college, we have to study virtually all day except during sleeping time.

To relieve stress, I exercise

>> correct

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