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I think these days education system pressure too much to demonstrate the acquisition of knowledge. We take the exam frequently and determine the ranking. That make us frustrate. That is very pressure. The knowledge is not just for taking a test, It is basically for our living. But The education is just focused on to enter the university. So after take the university entering exam, all the knowledge are forgotten in our brain.
Also, sometimes the student who can't bare this study stress suicide. so I think the education system must be changed for our life-time living not during the specific period.
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A wonderful Friday to you [이름]! ^^
Are you feeling better? I hope you are.
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and sharing your opinion about this matter.
I agree when you said, schools are putting far too much pressure on students today.
Schools are creating robots out of their students and teaching them to ace their tests instead of teaching them how to solve real-life problems and situations that they may encounter later in life.
I know how it\'s like. I\'ve been there and I\'ve done that.
There are times when I wish some of the difficult things that I have to face in life were taught in school.
If they were, life would have been much easier because you would at least have an idea on how to deal with it instead of solving those problems on your own.
In addition to that, putting too much pressure and setting very high expectations on students could ruin their self-esteem and make them believe that they\'re not good or talented enough.
Anyhow, this was a wonderful discussion and I appreciate your thoughts and opinions.
This gave me something to ponder upon.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
See you on Monday [이름]. ^^
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
I think these days education system pressure too much to demonstrate the acquisition of knowledge.
>> I think these days, the education system is putting too much pressure with regards to the acquisition of knowledge.
We take the exam frequently and determine the ranking.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We often take the exam and determine who came first and who came last.
That make us frustrate.
>> That frustrates us.
OR >> That makes us frustrated.
That is very pressure.
>> That is very pressuring.
The knowledge is not just for taking a test, It is basically for our living.
>> Knowledge is not just for taking a test. It is also needed in our daily living.
But The education is just focused on to enter the university.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: But the education system primarily focuses on getting the students in prestigious universities.
So after take the university entering exam, all the knowledge are forgotten in our brain.
>> So after passing the exam and entering the university, we immediately forget everything we\'ve studied.
Also, sometimes the student who can\'t bare this study stress suicide.
>> Sometimes, students who can\'t bear the pressure and the stress commit suicide.
I think the education system must be changed for our life-time living not during the specific period.
>> I think the education system must be changed and focus on teaching the students how to live using the knowledge they\'ve acquired.
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